Tense, the time in which you place the action, typically needs to
be kept consistent within a single sentence or paragraph. Tense needs to be kept in a logical relationship. If you shift tenses,
ask yourself whether the shift is justified. Here are several
potential trouble spots:
An author's assertion
The author's statement is introduced by the on-going present tense. The
author wrote the statement only once in the past; however, because the
assertion is in print, it continues to make that same statement to each
successive reader. It is ongoing in the present, in other words.
George Orwell warns
in 1984 that in the future,
Big Brother will be watching.
Kennedy's words, "Ask not what your country can do for you," ring
true today.
For similar reasons, the present tense should be used when discussing
literary figures and events.
Huck learns about social
hypocrisy as he travels down the Mississippi River with Jim.
Past events
When you are writing about an event or concept completed in the past,
express it in past tense.
Orwell wrote his novel 1984 in
1948.
Kennedy delivered his
inaugural address in 1961.
When writing about an event that took place before
the time of the events depicted in a literary work, it is appropriate to use
the past or the past perfect tense (had + past participle).
The Widow Douglas had cared for
Huck as a son.
Verb shifts
In the example below, the writer inadvertently shifts from present to
past, confusing the reader.
Wrong: The flowers bloom in the garden,
and the trees opened up their
leaves.
Some situations, however, do require a verb shift. You need to change the
verb tense from past to present when someone makes a claim that continues
into the present.
In the 1950's, President Eisenhower initiated
the interstate highway system that is undergoing
major renovation today.