HUM 122 and HUM 145/146
Basic
Outline and Format
for
Visual Art Analysis Paper, Performance Art Paper
and
Sample
Visual Art Paper
Basic Outline for Visual Arts Paper
1. Text
a) What is the medium (method/material) of this work of art?
b) Does this work of art have a specific subject that is immediately apparent? If there is no specific subject (or at least not one with which you are familiar) does there appear to be an overall thematic idea?
c) Are there certain compositional elements or unifying principles in this work of art that make its subject matter stand out or give strength to its theme? What are these elements and/or principles?
2. Context
a) Who created this work of art?
b) When and where did he/she live?
c) What events were occurring in his/her time and place? If they can be shown to have relevance to the art work, how might these events and ideas have shaped and influenced the ways in which the artist looked at his/her world?
d) What is the context in which you are viewing the work of art? Is it the original context? Does it help or hinder your full perception of the work? Why?
e) What is your context? What particular experiences, attitudes or assumptions do you bring to the work of art?
3. Subtext
a) Based on these events and ideas, what do you think the artist's purpose might have been in creating this work of art?
b) What kind of effect do you think this work of art had on its original audience?
c) In what ways do TEXT and CONTEXT work together to create SUBTEXT?
d) Given the events and ideas that shape your time and place as a viewer, what effect does the work of art have on you? How does it make you feel?
4. Format and Content of Paper
a) As stated in the syllabus, the visual artform (e.g., painting, sculpture) MUST be one that is on exhibit at either a) the JCCC campus at-large, or b) JCCC's Nerman Museum of Art. This is primarily so that I can have direct access to the piece that you are analyzing, as well as to expose you to the wide variety of fine art that we have on our campus.
b) Your research should demonstrate evidence of having consulted at least two other sources beyond our textbook and the artform itself. Such resources are not limited to books. They may include interviews with gallery personnel, interviews with artists, informational brochures, or the World Wide Web (with the exception of Wikipedia).
c) All sources are to be included in a bibliography. Sources are to be cited, either by footnote, endnote or parenthetically within the body of the paper itself. MLA format is preferred.
d) Physical Format: Typed, double-spaced, at least three fully-written pages in length (one inch header, one inch footer; do not "double-double-space" your paragraphs). Use a conventional font such as Times New Roman or Arial, no larger than 12 point. All quotes, textual excerpts, etc. must be cited, either by endnotes or parenthetically within the body of the paper. All interviews, sources, etc. should be included in a "Works and/or Sources Cited" page. Title page and/or works cited page are not included in the minimum page requirement stated above. Do not create a "cover page" whose empty-space header takes up a significant length of the page, as this will not be counted as a full page; the best way is to place all title, course, or ID information on a separate title page, and then simply begin your text at the top of page one.
Basic Outline for Performance Art Paper
1. Text
a) What is the medium of this performance? What is the particular genre or style within the medium (e.g., jazz music, classical dance)
b) In the given performance, are there certain compositional elements or unifying principles in this work that make its subject matter stand out or give strength to its theme? What are these elements and/or principles?
2. Context
a) Who created this work? When did he/she live? Still living? Are the creator and the performer the same person?
b) Describe the space in which you are viewing the performance (type of theatre, auditorium, recital hall, etc.). Does the space help or hinder your appreciation of the performance? Why?
3. Subtext
a) Based on what you have been able to learn about the composer/choreographer/performer, what do you think was his/her purpose in creating this work?
b) How do elements of text and context work together to create a subtextual "feeling" in this performance?
c) Given the events and ideas that shape your time and place as a viewer, how does the performance address your experience?
4. Format and Content of Paper
a) As stated in the syllabus, this MUST be a live performance that you have attended during the semester, in the areas of theatre, dance, or music. It is not limited to events on the JCCC campus, but please note: this does NOT include "bar bands," church pageants, high school performances, or "large venue concerts" (e.g., Sprint Center events, etc.). In terms of campus performances, there are numerous inexpensive and sometimes free opportunities on campus, particularly in the areas of academic music and theatre performance. I will bring the free on-campus events to your attention as the semester progresses.
b) The paper must include either a program or ticket stub (attached) as evidence of attendance.
c) All sources are to be included in a bibliography. Sources are to be cited, either by footnote, endnote or parenthetically within the body of the paper itself. MLA format is preferred.
d) Physical Format: Typed, double-spaced, at least three fully-written pages in length (one inch header, one inch footer; do not "double-double-space" your paragraphs). Use a conventional font such as Times New Roman or Arial, no larger than 12 point. All quotes, textual excerpts, etc. must be cited, either by endnotes or parenthetically within the body of the paper. All interviews, sources, etc. should be included in a "Works and/or Sources Cited" page. Title page and/or works cited page are not included in the minimum page requirement stated above. Do not create a "cover page" whose empty-space header takes up a significant length of the page, as this will not be counted as a full page; the best way is to place all title, course, or ID information on a separate title page, and then simply begin your text at the top of page one.
A SAMPLE
VISUAL ART PAPER
(reprinted here with permission of student)
***note that this is single spaced simply for convenience of reading***
Louise Bourgeois' "Woman with Packages" is cast in bronze (substitution), but was originally made of wood in the 1940s. The sculpture can be found between OCB and EMC at Johnson County Community College. Placed in the middle of the brick walkway, "Woman with Packages" is sculpture in the round and it sprouts from a nest of green bushes. It is a four to five foot tall, slim, narrow and smooth piece that resembles a needle. Attached on one side of the woman's hip area are two club-like shapes, and on the other side hangs a sole one.
"Woman with Packages" was unfortunately passed over by me many times until I began taking Art History courses. Without the title I still do not believe I would know what the sculpture represents. Although the narrow and vertical "body" does lead one to associate it with the human figure, it resembles a needle at first glance. I do not think the location provides a well suited atmosphere for Bourgeois' work. I believe it is easily missed, being surrounded by brick, but I like the idea that it is located outdoors.
Ann Wiklund, an Art History instructor at JCCC, has said that the elongated oval shapes hanging from the sides of "Woman with Packages" represent children, and the slim base itself represents a woman. Bourgeois is from France, born in Paris, and as a child coped with her father's affairs. Her mother knew of them, but passively ignored them and they were never talked about. Her father allowed one mistress to move into the house, saying she was there to teach the children English. As with most artists, Louise Bourgeois' childhood had a strong effect on her work.
"Woman with Packages" is from a period, about 1945-1955, when Bourgeois created what she called "Personages." The "Personages" were sculpted figures of wood and allowed an outlet for the artist's personal issues. JCCC's Bourgeois piece deals with the domestic responsibility of women, an issue that has become increasingly important since WWII when women poured into the workforce.
WWII was an important turning point in the art world because artists flocked from Europe to the United States to escape the chaos of war overseas. During the time Bourgeois began making her "personages", New York City, where she lived with her husband, was producing Abstract Expressionist artists like painters Jackson Pollock and Mark Rothke, and sculptors like Isamu Noguchi and David Smith.
I have read that Bourgeois' purpose in making the "personages" were to keep her company. The sculptures were portraits of her friends and family who she missed greatly after moving to America from France. They were exhibited in groups and turned "facing" one another to appear as though they were involved. "Woman with Packages" is not necessarily alone considering the "packages" are children, but they are hanging from the main stem of the sculpture which creates a heaviness or annoyance. Sometimes I want to reach out and pull the "packages" off of the piece so it will be more balanced for my eyes to look at.
Since "Woman with Packages" was created in the 1940s, I would consider that the original time it was received by the public. I think the audiences would have reacted towards Bourgeois' sculpture as they did other abstract sculpture: with confusion. The public did not embrace Abstract Expressionism because they did not understand what was going on. In most paintings and sculptures there was nothing that the average person could associate with or relate to. Even on JCCC's campus in the 1990's I doubt that many students know what "Woman with Packages" is, who it is by, or why the campus is lucky to have it. I didn't at one time.
The ways in which text and context work together to create subtext in "Woman with Packages" involves the piece's history. The sculpture was cast in bronze, but not before 1995. It had stayed in the wooden form since the late 1940s when the piece was originally thought of and made. Maybe Bourgeois wanted this piece to possess a more lasting medium by finally creating it in metal. She created this sculpture in the late 1940s when women were entering the workforce, but I'm sure there was more meaning in it from her childhood. Since her mother ignored her father's affairs and kept providing care for her family, I believe "Woman with Packages" could portray the instances of the difficulty to carry around such emotional and physical baggage. The "packages" do not appear as if they are hanging comfortably and I think that is an important compositional element of the work. Without knowing the title, the sculpture does not give much of a hint as to what it is meant to be. Of course, not every sculpture is supposed to have a meaning, but I think with the title Bourgeois gave the piece she wanted viewers to "get" what it was.
"Woman with Packages" is an important piece to me, and now that I am educated about it I cannot pass it by without admiring it. Bourgeois is making a statement about the domestic obligations of women, and I have yet to decide if it is a positive one. Since the thought of marriage or, heaven forbid, a family, is foreign to my imagination as a student with limited responsibilities, I tend to accept she is not sculpting a June Cleaver. However, I do believe she is sculpting a strong woman who is still standing straight and tall although she is weighed down by her "packages."
References
l) Arnason, H. H., & Prather, Marla F. (1998). History of Modern Art. New Jersey: Prentice Hall, Inc.
2) Gardner Paul (1994). Louise Bourgeois. New York: Universe Publishing.
3) Strick, Jeremy (1994). Louise Bourgeois: The Personages. St. Louis: St. Louis Art Museum.